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【寫作要求】

學校英語社團在舉辦征文比賽，請你根據(jù)以下提示內容，寫一篇題為“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英語文章。內容要點如下：

1. 對我影響最大的人是我的媽媽，她四十幾歲；

2. 她總是耐心傾聽我的問題，并建議我如何解決它們；

3. 作為一名醫(yī)生，她常說再怎么仔細也不為過。她總是加班，把她的大部分時

間都奉獻給了工作；

4. 所以，我認為她不僅是位好媽媽，也是名好醫(yī)生。

5. 我希望 ……

要求：1. 內容須包含所有要點，語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)90個左右；

3. 第5點的內容需展開合理想象，用2-3句話補充完整。

【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

My mother is the person who has influenced me most. 

She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. 

I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.