Power of China

籽籽寫(xiě)的關(guān)于高鐵的，第3篇英文小文，修改完82.5分，是寫(xiě)英文小文章以來(lái)，最高的一次，上次是81.5的《Only He》，也是關(guān)于高鐵的。 
發(fā)在這里，留念。 
題目照例是籽籽寫(xiě)完以后，籽媽給取得，除了有兩句行文表述完全改掉了，其他改動(dòng)不是很多，時(shí)態(tài)也學(xué)會(huì)統(tǒng)一了，錯(cuò)誤的時(shí)態(tài)非常少。 
沒(méi)有培訓(xùn)班，沒(méi)有外教，沒(méi)有額外的語(yǔ)法輔導(dǎo)，籽籽也算誤打誤撞的開(kāi)啟了以寫(xiě)促學(xué)，雖然昨晚因?yàn)閷?xiě)這個(gè)，導(dǎo)致一個(gè)字的中英文都沒(méi)看… 
還好即使她有時(shí)候?qū)懙耐耆菲ú煌?，我也沒(méi)表達(dá)什么不滿！??

等這家伙放學(xué)，看到比之前最高的《Only He》還多了1分，又可以開(kāi)心好一會(huì)兒了！ 

Power of China 
No doubt in the world the success of high -speed railway is lofty and amazing. It makes transportation more convenient for many of us. But the rising road of our country's high -speed railway isn't in one fell swoop. Before now it experienced lots of meaningful steps. 
In 1978, big news happened when Deng Xiaoping was visiting Japan. He rode a high -speed train to Tokyo. Later the picture was passed to China. Everyone who saw the picture was shocked. They thought it was amazing and the picture became the sprout of China's high -speed railway. 
But at that time we didn't have any condition for building high -speed railway. So some people began to find some way. Years later the first high -speed railway was built. Meanwhile it was the time when many high -speed trains were born. 
In the new century, China went into the era of high -speed railway. More and more railways were built. And the high -speed railway from Beijing to Tianjin reduced many times of traveling. In the winter of 2010, a miracle happened. A high -speed train's motion speed reached 486.1km/h. But it was still comfortable in the train. Everyone cheered up at that moment. 
But the nice time didn't last. In 2011, tragedy happened. Lightning strikes made wrong of device. Later a high -speed train was hit from behind by another train. The tragedy claimed many lives. This was a heavy blow to China's high -speed railway. After the accident many people began to refuse high -speed trains and most high -speed railway's speed became lower. 
Afterwards many people used their experience to change most people's perspective about the high -speed railway. More and more people rode high -speed trains so these experiences made no one believe the abuse with the high -speed railway. More and more high -speed railways were built and formed a network. China's high -speed railway gradually came out to other countries such as China to Laos, China to Thailand.