Only He（修訂版）

娃自己修訂版的，確實好像更升華了一些！

雖然耽誤了30分鐘學初中數學的時間，雖然被我惡意要求學完3個例題視頻，雖然母女倆一度因為浪費時間，差點吵起來…

但確實改的還不錯，具體有什么語法錯誤，我這個不專業(yè)的媽媽，真的指不出來了，我也指導不了！

睡前認真的讀了她修改后的小文章，認真的夸了她，籽籽很開心，表示以后看了新聞，多寫一點！我歡喜的表示很不錯的想法，但心里默念，還是多弄弄數學吧！??

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花5塊錢月費，用批改網改了下，比一年前的流水賬，分數高了很多。除了費時間，其實我是不反對的，就是這大哥保不準何時靈感突發(fā)，非要寫，非要改，立刻馬上，絲毫不顧及耽誤學習… 
老母親難免心里不痛快。 
給她好好的傳到網上改了，八成又要激起無限的創(chuàng)作熱情，真的是管不對，不管也不對… 

Only He 
It rained and rained. Last month, heavy rains and lightning always happened. One day, on Jun 4th of 2022, a high -speed train started its journey from Guiyangbei. 
If no accident would happen, it would arrive at Guangzhounan in five and half hours. Soon, the train went in a tunnel in Rong Jiang county at 10 am. An accident would soon happen but no one knew. A debris flow had happened in the exit of the tunnel. Suddenly, the train driver felt awkward:"Something had blocked the tracks,"he thought. "maybe it's a debris flow!" Thereupon, he opened emergency brakes at once. The train won't stop at RonyJiang station, so it was still at high speed. It couldn't stop at once. It glided nine -hundred meters and finally stopped. Two cars were derailed, one was struck to the platform. Then, a train attendent called him. But, she found that no one answered the call because he had died. A train attendent and seven passengers only suffered a slight injury while the train driver died. He sacrificed himself to save the passenger's lives. Unfortunately only he became the only victim of the accident.