Twitter’s birthday

大抵是套系的分級(jí)讀多了，圓圓告訴我，前幾天他講的那群小鳥(niǎo)的故事也是一個(gè)系列的，今天晚上給我講了第二個(gè)，故事名是Twitter’s birthday，他講一句我寫(xiě)一句，講完后，我們一起討論和修改了幾處，主要是前后邏輯和語(yǔ)法一致問(wèn)題。

開(kāi)始堅(jiān)決不同意做任何修改，后來(lái)跟他解釋，通常作者交稿后，編輯可以提出修改意見(jiàn)，他現(xiàn)在是作者，媽媽是編輯，他聽(tīng)我這么說(shuō)，覺(jué)得很好玩，才同意一起修改??

睡前告訴我下一個(gè)故事是backyard, 好期待他繼續(xù)講下去，真的成一個(gè)系列??

今天的故事記錄如下：

Twitter’s birthday

Chapter 1 

The day before yesterday was Twitter’s birthday. 

She was five years old.

Birdy and the Racing bird gave Twitter a birthday cake.

Birdy gave Twitter a present.

The present was a frog who can jump up and down in the water.

Chapter 2 

They had a party. 

They listened music and played balloons.

They had a picnic in the garden. 

That night, they gazed at the stars in the backyard. 

They counted stars: “One, two, three, four…..” 

There were hundreds of millions of stars in the sky.

Chapter 3

Next morning, they went to the seaside.

They built sandcastle and played with seaweed. 

The waves were coming. 

“Help!” They shouted. 

 A frog came by, he said: “What was all that noise?” 

 “The waves will ruin our sandcastle!” They said. 

 “Sorry about that. I cannot hold back the tide.” The frog said. 

 “Oh no!” They cried. “Our sandcastle is in danger!” 

At that moment, a very long snake came by.

“What was all that noise?” He asked.  

“Our sandcastle is in danger!” Birdy said.    

“I can hold back the tide.” The snake said.

“Hurray!” They cheered.  

Chapter 4 

The snake blocked the waves.     

The sandcastle was saved!

“Ssssss….” The snake said.

“Ribbit! Ribbit!” The frog said.   

“Thanks for saving our sandcastle! Cheep! Cheep!” Birdy and Twitter said. 

The end.